waves foam,crash,recede
seagulls fly,sandpipers wade
footprints in wet sand
Author notes
Option 3.Haiku.Written April 5th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- my one day contest about the BEACH!!! OH YEAH! lol by gowiththeflow.
300 points, ended June 22, 2005, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Points to be Added (enter enter enter enter) by lexie like woah.
1250 points, ended August 12, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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oooh i love it, its the exact think you see at the beach.. thanks for entering and best of luck in my contest.. here are your claps
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footprints found in the Wet Land!!!
this was inticing and well formed
Tamara
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I wanna go to the beach!!!!!
It's snowing again......WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
No beach for me I geuss!
Loved the Senyru!!! ~Laura -
simple
yes, a couple of clear & simple observations at a beach,
with a bit of mystery in the sandprints...
it captures an ordinary moment...
have you ever written a haiku with a twist in the final line?
they're quite interesting, for me...
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A nice read and wonderful thoughts of a day at the beac
Sherry
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Short but nice imagery.
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