Tears fall from my eyes
On this lonely night
As I sit and think
How nothing is alright
I try to fight it
As the urge grows strong
I'm holding it back
But not for very long
I'm thinking about giving in
How I have to
Oh the pain inside me
If only you knew
Why not?
Just add to my collection
For I don't know
That girl in my reflection
I can feel my heart
Inside it's breaking
For the emotional punches
It has been taking
My stomach is queasy
I feel it in knots
And my soul
Inside it rots
Depression..
Kills from the inside out
And I can feel it
For that there is no doubt
It's taking over my mind
And soon it will be to late
For I will have to
Seal my fate
The urge is getting stronger
I'm starting to lose the fight
I just hope and pray
I will make it though the night
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Written July 25th, 2006
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great!
WOW! This is absouletly awesome!!! I can Definently relate. I totally needed to read this tonight! Sometimes it helps to know there are other people, out there somewhere, going through similar things. Idk. I guess what I'm tryin' to say is that well, idk. lol. I'm speechless.
This poem is great. I love the rhyme and flow of it. perfect! Keep it up, writing really does help!
Ashley -
Very good work. So sad. Can feel the lonliness in the lines. Good job
Soulful Woman -
This is a very good write that you had penned here your rhyme and rhyme flowed beautifully, I hope this does not apply to you its so sad I can feel the heartache written into this poem, the picture you chosen is great
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great piece, i personally enjoyed your style...
i hope u get through whatsever u are in
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This is a amazing poem. I love it. It makes me think about the person I see when I look in the mirror, and when I get depressed if I'll make it through the night
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