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In love with love 5

It was the end of her senior year.  The year that Nick ripped her heart out, the year that she lost the closeness she thought she had with Zach.  The year, that everything seemed to fall apart.  It was graduation night, she got her diploma, she grew up, she graduated high school.  The senior class was going on a cruise, a small cruise, just for the night.  Eva didn't look forward to it.  She was never close with any of these people, why would she want to be stuck on a boat with them until 2 or 3 in the morning? But something happened that she never thought would.  She spent that entire night, with Zach.  

They talked, and caught up.  She explained to him what happened with Nick, and he explained to her how everything would be ok eventually.  She'd find someone worth while.  She just laughed and told him she doubted it.  As she always did.  They had a chemistry that no one else seemed to have.  He noticed it just as much as she did.  All they could do is laugh together, and have fun.  There was never a time that she saw him and wasn't smiling.  And the same went for him.  The entire cruise she didn't leave his side but a few times.  He just comforted her so much.  She knew, that after that night, she would never ever see him again...she wanted to make the most of it.  And she did.  She got her hugs, he was there for her, and when they left, that was it.  She knew it was it.  And that crushed her like no one would ever....ever believe.

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Written July 25th, 2006

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  • ConcreteGirl87
    July 26, 2006
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    Eh, I was at work, and I haven't written for like...6 months...so...i knew it wouldn't be great.


  • hopeleslytaken
    July 25, 2006
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    So, finally coming back to AP huh? Is this a story or a documentary Eva? Make it a bit more interesting, not so...documental....lol. Anyway....Great storyline...i wonder what happens next ;-) lol. You know what? I read like the last line of each one of these stories and its funny cause they are the most interesting part. Not to sound mean if that does....But its funny cause thats like what draws the reader in...it makes them look forward to the next one.....not bad...

    LOVE YOU! -Ebi-
    Edited on Jul 25, 5:46 p.m. because 'i missed a thought...'.