Its been so long since I've been here.
A letter sent, befalls my grace.
To know my absence,is his dismay,
Makes me feel, kinda glad.
But then again, it makes me sad.
I am not one to gripe.
But some things never change.
I just needed to take some time,
seems now were estranged again.
Time has never helped me heal, For time remains the same.
Its I who change in intervals, seems time is just a pain.
People who have the notion that time can heal all wounds.
Obviously hasn't danced around, aboard the ship of fools.
Let me say, its been to long.
So to you I toast a cheer.
You are missed my wicked friend, until we meet again=)
Me
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Written July 25th, 2006
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I appreciate your input, but there is such a thing as humble and anal. I see your a musician and it really surprised me that you would do a typo gig on me. Laughs* Take care darlin.
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I like this poem, it is interesting, just watch some gramatical errors:
In the third stanza is it supposed to be we're? or were?
Watch your agreement, it should be people obviously HAVEN't dance around.
I like the end, especially that it is signed by me, i think that is really creative and adds a lot to the poem as a whole. Great job and keep up the writing
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