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Blood hits the floor

Cut after
Cut after
Cut...
String after
Sting after
Sting...
Drop after
Drop after
Drop...
Plip
Plop
Plip
Plop
Blood hits the floor
Plip
Plop
Plip
Plop
The pain hit me at the core
Plip
Plop
Plip
Plop
I won't live anymore
Plip
Plop
Plip
Plop
For that you can be sure
Plip
Plop
Plip
Plop
I'm fading fast
Plip
Plop
Plip
Plop
My breath it will not last
Plip
Plop
Plip
Plop
And I'm reminded of my past
Plip
Plop
Plip
Plop
The last drop of blood it falls
Plip
I have given death my sweet call

Author notes

I know this may sound weird...But I thought of that while I was laying down last night..lol...I thought it was a Halloween..Spooky type thing...Ik it isn't that good...But I wanted to put it on here!.
Written July 25th, 2006

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  • parasol
    July 25, 2006
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    Interesting poem. I have an impression that it’s about suicide/self-harm. It was a bit lengthy and didn’t say much. But I enjoyed the use of onomatopoeia throughout the poem.
    - Andi