The cruelty is dancing on the heads,
With its ugliest appearance Satan-led,
Displaying ruthlessness of many kinds,
On the helpless bodies and minds!
But the suppressed refute all the fears,
And ready to face injuries and tears,
They kick the danger, reluctant to surrender,
Whatever the price they all poor render!
Their passion like rock, sonorous their voice,
Liberty is their mission, they daily pay price,
No body still can their hurdles disclose,
Dying mercilessness, brave lions like pose!
No one is there to break the hand,
Of injustice, the woeful bands,
Aah awesome environ, pile of dead,
Dark skies are shivering, poor earth is red!
I cannot say them end the war,
Grievances countless, yet result is far
From prediction; yet everyone know,
And answers without winking the brow
That it was serpent who started that,
Above in heavens, at paradise's gate,
Israel representing serpent,
Lebanon can die, but cannot be bent!!!!
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Written July 25th, 2006
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Many thanks dear Emonquente...your comments are very precious for me.
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You have an opinion, good for you. ^.~
Good write, keep at it and other such ego-boost-geared comments.
Ta-Ta,
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israeli forces consist of mad butchers who are killing helpless Lebonese.... good poem.
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Many many thanks dear friend for your kind appreciations. Are you from Lebanon respected Red Rose Soul?...It is the land of graceful, brave, laborious, handaome and generous people rich with fertile brains and craftman's hands...I love Lebanon's Jabran and sober people very much..I am with my Lebanese brethern at this critical moment. May Almight protect the innocent people from the cruelty of wrethced israel!!!
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Respected Mary O!...Many thanks for lending some moments from your precious schedule to give a read to my works. Further, I am under obligation for your crtical suggestions!!!
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You are so right the brave message the lebanese people are sending the whole world is clear, we prefer to die with pride then live bowing to the agressor. I salute you for this great work.
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Where we stand not at the top ranks of the world's money affairs the rest of us are all left virtually nieve, or in the dark, yes? But we were all born of Love out of Love (not referring to conjugal love but spiritual love within) and Love/God will ultimately prevail.
Good work. Just a couple of add-it fix-its: 5th stanza, "I cannot say (to) them. . ." and "; yet everyone know(s). . ." and 6th stanza, "That it was (the) serpent
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oh so pathetic, so miserable it is..you have worked on a splendid topic that is a burning issue these days.
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Tears are flowing from my eyes dear Mujtaba H Zaidi. May God protect the poor Lebanon from the clutches of wicked israel(aamen)
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I can mourn the poor people only...
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