I feel.
I feel so much
That I can't stop
The barrage of emotions
Weakens me
And I can't differentiate
Between each screaming voice
I am unaware
Of the singularity
Of each emotion
Because I am smothered
by too much
Of what
I feel.
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Written July 25th, 2006
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there is no way to pick a single line to be my favourite and i cant just paste the whole poem in here though that would suit the best part of it, it is a wonderful write and you put across the feeling of being suffocated by your own emotions very well, i think the fact the lines are shorter also helps with the flow and the feel of the poem
great work
laurax -
Brill
Wow, you are so creative and talented- you blow me away! A short but definitely effective creation and I very much enjoyed the piece. I love the lines:
"The barrage of emotions
Weakens me
And I can't differentiate
Between each screaming voice"
Pure brilliance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love from Kate -
You have tackled a hard topic in that it is common place to everyone, and therefore is done all the time. Good writing and thanks for sharing.
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For a short piece this flows really well and so much said within those few short lines. I love the confusion yet the clarity of what you are trying to say. Well done, love this one. Claire
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Very expressive. Can relate all to well to this piece. Part of life..every changing..always heart tugging. Thank you for sharing your feelings with us. Keep writing. Dawn
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Your use of vocabulary is wonderful, and so expressive. The concept is something I'm sure many people have had to struggle with, myself included and you captured the feelings beautifully.
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Brilliantly written! wonderful poem!!!!! its sad & burst with emotion but i absolutely enjoed it!!!!
kyles wiffie -
Authors feelings.
What can I sat that has not already been said?
We have all been there at some time in our lives
Well expressed, Is it a recent feeling? -
great poem
Wow, this poem is amazing. For being so short, it has so much meaning, depth and emotion. Keep up the great work! -
very good
great work , thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the good work this is very very good and i enjoyed reading thank you
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"I can't differentiate
Between each screaming voice
I am unaware
Of the singularity
Of each emotion"
These lines are just so expressive.
I really admire the simplicity and the intensity of this.
The brievity gives so much depth to this...
In a moment of strong emotion, we cannot utter too many words and this just reflects the essence of the poem.
great job here.
Best of luck.
~Hana~
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this is beautiful, the emotions you convey in this poem are very powerful! well done and thanks for sharing! LJMYERS
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good
I like the flow and the form of it. Seems like its written on a spur of the moment yet falls into place. Hope to see more
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wow...I really liked this poem and could associate with it. I often feel that I cannot trust what I am feeling - hahaha...what a contradiction? That I have to go on what I know and not what I feel.
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Great
I love the framing technique, really awesome -
well done, it is eveident that you have put alot of effort into this poem, good job. and i hope that you can write lots more great poetry
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the very tone and language in this poem is suffocating, puts the reader right into the narrators position, great write.
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What a wonderful write you have created.......you make the emotions come to life through your words..the feeling of being overwhelmed by a sea of emotions so apparent.
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And I can't differentiate
Between each screaming voice
i love this part of the poem, i think shorter poems are sometimes better fewer words sometimes mean more, this is a brilliant poem, i feel any longer and it would have ruiend the flow but you did it perfectly great work
laura -
Feel and not be fooled
for the emotions
turns the brain aloof
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AHHH EXCELLENT
ohhh god this is me. right there you've just taken the conflict inside of me and put it down on paper - something i have been trying to do for over a year and a half and never succeeding. i congratulate you and i thank you ... so so so so so much ...
keep writing the emotion of this was intense, i hope to see more from you ... thanks heaps for sharing this poem...
xoxoxox rach. -
this is a good poem. I like it alot. cause sometimes feeling can over take a person. and it's hard for them to do anything. I get this from the line:
"Because I am smothered"
I really like this poem though. my fav. lines are:
"The barrage of emotions
Weakens me"
I'm not really sure why but I just love that line. oh do keep writing. I really like your poems. thatnx for sharring.
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Delightful
I like how this poem just describes the emotion of what a person feels. The shortestness of it, just brings the point out. This is a very good write. The flow fits just right.
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