yeah, yeah, Im doin' fine.
Im... ok...? now.
I boxed up all of our pics
& the earings & necklace set.
I even put in all our notes & letters from 9th grade.
too bad I cant unsay all the words we thought ment so much.
I wish I could put away all the memories; good and bad.
{not that there are really any ...bad...}
because thinkin' on all the awesome, fun times just makes me... hurt.
why cant I unthink them?
!there always in my head
and it makes me miss 'em so horribly!
Im findin' out its .i.m.p.o.s.s.i.b.l.e. to do
but... I wonder... if I could unremember them... would I?
Oh, its no use.
I cant unlove you.
Author notes
dear Katie...
well... the ring im wearing right now is big and sparkly, but it hurts to type. =] please dont be too harsh on me!
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I liked this piece, no rhyme scheme yet well versed. Bravo, i liked it very much!!!
I'm sorry you can't unlove him, I know the feeling!
~Katie -
Cool, and I really love your style of writing, even your page was good to go through, and I like the way you have chose your background colours. Bright and happy!
PS. Don't think am saying all this to win a cup, My work will give me that and nothing else. I say what I feel. take care. -
wow
i cant unlove you
that is just tooooo true
u cant wipe it away so that it never existed
but you can move on...
i dont know what at all to tell you
cuz im in that situation
but though i kno this poem aint one bit tru
( if it is, id kick that guy's a$$)
wonderful write
keep it up!!!!
love ya ♥
ur ap sumtin wid an uncle sister mother and daughter-in-law
i think ....
oh wellz
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THAT WAS AN AWEOME POEM! i love this poem it rocks nice pic too by the was lol... your really good at poetry nice job!
Keep up the great work and keep writing more poetry soon!!
Thank-you also for the nice comment you made on my poems! Also for the applause on my poem "for Mum" i really apprisiate it! um... also did you like the pic i put in my poem someones under my bed i think its wicked.. lol
Talk to you soon.. bye bye for now....
From Princess Paige
xoxoxoxo
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thank you very much for your comment! it means alot to me.
~nessa marie~ -
AWESOME!
Awesome little piece of lyrical poetry, me can think of a few tunes to strum along to this as you can too I bet. I think it's so cool you play guitar. That's sweet, I know you have fun with it, because my son and I enjoy it as well, and my nephew, and my brother, my uncle, and friends. I guess you can say we like strings. 
Keep on penning, and much love to you and yours, I applaud ya! 
Peace, Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
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lol yes you took the pic. i remember... sadly.
i miss him so bad. its not even funny.
but... who the hell is 'the hulk'? lol!
and he acts like he wants nothing to do with me anymore. you should totally talk to him if you ever work with him. please?!?
thanks for commentin on my poem! lol byebye!!
~nessa marie~ -
thank you for your comment!
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omg i remember your guys' notes! i always tried to take them. and i TOTALLY took this picture.
i think you guys should stay tight friends.
otherwise hulk will kill him.
<3 i love you dear.
thanks for reading my poem.
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if only we could unthink, unsay, and unsee certain events in our lives, however we cant which means we are forced to get throught them and become stronger at the end of it.
i enjoyed reading this piece, it comes accross sad and sentimental
ang
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