Rain
Listen to the rain
that falls
upon the window
drifting into
air
listen to it
think of nothing
but the rain
be calm
and relaxed
listen to the rain
it makes you
fall asleep
listen to the rain
very very
deep
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Written July 24th, 2006
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This is a lovely poem, Ashley
I love the rain and this went right to the core of me, straight to my heart.
You're becoming quite a good poet. There's lots of talent within you and it's expressed in everything you write
A very good poem, my dear
Dee
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I so love the rain. It helps to calm me whenever there's something going on! I can almost hear it raining outside
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i love to listen to the rain
wonderful and relaxing poem great work -
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That was nice to read. I love rain. -
dear this was a nice piece, my only suggestion would be to make it easier for folks to read. The light color on the white background makes it impossible to read unless you highlight it, some folks won't take the time to do that and will just go onto another page, and this is one that should be read as it proves that simplicity can produce some very good poems.
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Rain always facinates. It is a life giver. Withot it there are no rivers, for that matter life does not exists.It is the poets pet subject through ages yet it has not become sterile. Anything about rain stirs very deeply. A right poetry from different angle. Thanks for sharing
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This one is a beautiful write
You wrote one that is so beautiful and I love the rain. Somtime I sit in it just to refresh and think.
Listening to the rain bring spirit and games. You did a great jon My little one old one. -
this was cool. very simple. i liked it, it had good flow. great job.
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wonderful! You remind me of myself at your age when I began writing. You have got a lot of talent kiddo, way to go!
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