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death

can you see the light 'oh' bright
can you hear the bells ringing
can feel the velvet dress

kiss deaths cold lips
as tears leave words unspoken
cold hand hold my heart
death is in my soul

can you hear the screaming crows
can you see the blood all round
can you feel the heart slow down

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Written July 24th, 2006

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