Trees turn colors in the emptiness of the earth's soul
Leaving the wind to keep the moon warm
outside luminescent coolness wraps animals in calmness
while inside youth dreams of an almost forgotten freedom
The sense of nirvana touches my aura
reminding me of the way you felt
that September.
Author notes
Written July 24th, 2006
A contest entry
- ~September~ by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended July 25, 2006, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a really good poem.
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Excellent
Ah, September capture with vivid eloquence in a short, but touching poem. Very well done. -
mmm september.
it almost makes me forget school is starting :]
but really, beautiful descriptions -
Well, at least it contains no trite bromides in the form of worn out cliches.
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oh no, September poetry already...But I loved this read, Chauna. you not only expressed the beauty of the season itself by the very images but the last lines drew the poem to a very touching and lovely close.
best wishes to you in the contest!
Jo -
Thank you!
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excellent
Such a creative write of the season. Just exploding with emotion. I just loved it, keep up the wonderful writing and good luck in the contest
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thank you
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This is indeed lovely. Your words flow with beautiful imagery. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you
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This is simply beautiful, so captivating and creative. A lovely write full of description and wonderful imagery. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x LB
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