Slammed around
pushed to the ground
Crushed the only heart you knew
well it survived but its a bit confused
Do you remember what we were?
The times you made me better
communicated through letters
Talked on the phone till 1 in the morning
Do you want to keep me? This is your warning
I'm sorry I've changed a bit but so have you
How can we fix this to make it seem brand new
I'll forget that time you made me cry
If you forget the time I hurt you inside
We will suffer memory loss together
I took that life for granted
but now I want all of it back
It seemed like a dream
so I woke up
but then you weren't next to me
This is reality
A thin line between love and hate
I hate to say this that I sincerely love you
I'll be yours forever so loosen your grip
I'm scared to disappear in the grasp of your arms
I can't breathe someones suffocating me
I'm far from home now, your not near
maybe this is the life I picked
but I don't remember what happened
Remember the stars that I looked at in amazement
You didn't understand why I pondered them with thought
They reminded me of your eyes, you brightened up my day
I wished upon every star to make you mine
This is just a coma, wake me up
I woke up this morning and you were gone
You had work but didn't want to say goodbye
is it wrong to feel deserted
This life isn't the same
I ponder reality now, not the stars
Why didn't you wake me?
Why don't you write to me?
What is the meaning of love?
Why can't I remember the feeling of floating
I used to float inside your arms
I felt protected
Now I feel constrained
I feel pressure
I forgot everything, Tell me who I am
tell me what we have
who are you
why did you leave
Author notes
have you ever been lost inside life? Have you ever lost the feeling you used to have? Well Im lost and the worst pat about it is I know I love him and always want him close. So this is a poem about how I feel. Its not just about the guy its about everyone around me. It might not ryme but most good poems don't Leave me comments about what you think of it. Its my first one in a long time so It might be a bit rusty.
Written July 24th, 2006
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AN interesting piece - I think we all would like some selective amnesia at times in our life journey. An interesting piece - thanks for sharing!
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this confusion .. we all pass through this!!u might know better so im not gonna say anythin.. but abt ur poem well i like it except that its a lil too long!! but nice work!! keep on writing
me
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exciting! i love the word amnesia with this poem and keep up the good flow!
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woah.. I know exactly how you are feeling.gOOD poem
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