I think that if I had the choice,
Of a place I’d like to visit.
It would be a place that everyone knows,
But a place where no one ever just visits.
It would be a place of beauteous skies,
Of colors bright and pleasant.
The smell of the air is soft and sweet,
And days will never end.
This place is where my loved ones are,
I hope to someday see.
My Father and my Sister’s there,
With my Grandparents by their side.
But I’m afraid if I visit,
I'd never want to leave.
Author notes
Both my sister and my Dad have passed away. The place I was talking about is Heaven.
Written July 24th, 2006
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You write so vivid. I can feel the emotion. Beautiful!
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Very nice
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Thanks Pat. I'm really glad you still read my writes. I don't have many but they mean alot to me. Hope you continue to enjoy them.
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If only we could visit heaven, for just a few short moments and share a hug with our loved ones taht have departed us. That would really be great. Good write Mom.
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Thanks Josh, I'm glad you liked it. Not many people read my writes so I'm glad you took the time...
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A nice short poem I think this poem could be more visual however... and I wish there was such a nice place to be that every one knew about ,but no one visited, that would truley be peaceful... goodjob
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