Love is the way you feel
when they walk into a room,
the impact they have
on the way that you live day-to-day life.
Your stomach turns,
you stutter and slur
the intense jealousy felt
when you see him with "her".
Love is the dreams that
enter your mind when asleep,
the ones where your love
becomes pure and so deep.
Nothing tastes as good
as his sucrose kiss
noone's hand
fits as perfect as this.
Love is the ache
in the pit of your heart
when you don't see him for days
can't bare be apart.
It never turns sour
just consistently grows
as each day together
his love, he always shows.
Love is the greatest
emotion to feel
but if all goes pear-shaped
it takes the longest to heal.
The worst kind of love
as a matter of fact
is the kind that is taken
but not given back...
Author notes
Written July 24th, 2006
A contest entry
- what is LOVE? by tearrsofthemoon.
350 points, ended August 16, 2006, 42 entries
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WOW
E, this is amazing, you are so talented, so easy to read and from the heart, louise x -
amazing
OMG I am blown away! This kept me on the edge of my seat. Looks like you really know what you're talking about when it comes to love because you did a great job describing it. Keep it up!
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