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The Radii of Horizons

throw away this dimension
in the s h i f t of linear time
to the sine-wave pattern of
    f/r\a/c\t/a\l smiles and good-bye kisses
     dropping
                   and
                            falling
           in time to
galatic gridlock

                              p  s  !
                          a    
                        e        
conciousness l
bounding back against the rail
[catch the next train]

prove this prophecy
in a one-step, one-foot, one-line program
{watch out for summer solstice}

the extremity of the fringe of --
    f
      a
        l
          l
            i
              n
                g
                     suns

  covert margins b  e  n  d
and b.r.e.a.k.
  too much give
    too much take

painted eyelids and
empty matrices

wake up to find
 fractured reality

Author notes

Short version of inspiration?  Barbie ROM.  It's not great but I figured I'd add something since Gwenfrewi Rhiannon Meririd Amherst wasn't any better.

It's actually kinda creepy-sounding, I know, but... I'm starting to kinda like it.  ^^;  I dunno.  You don't have to like it.  It doesn't have to make sense to you.  What matters is that I get it.
Written July 24th, 2006

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  • Stix
    July 25, 2006
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    Wow, that was an interesting and overall well done piece!

    Good job!