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AP Grandfather


My AP Grandfather is a
Tiger running in the wild
But deep down inside
He's just a big child
He has a big heart
To share with all of AP
Just wait till you meet him
I'm sure you'll agree
He lends a helping hand
Whenever your in need
So make sure you go give
His poems a read!!

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This is a poem I wrote for my AP Grandfather JohnnyD!!
Written July 24th, 2006

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  • pozo
    September 29, 2006
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    'Your' should be 'you're' (you are). This was a lovely poem for your AP grandfather. Keep writing, this was a great tribute. AP= Allpoetry, AP noobs
    All the best
    Pozo


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    August 26, 2006
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    A very beautiful poem my dear
    JohnnyD is certainly a wonderful kind hearted man who knows how to be a big kid
    Keep up the great writing always
    Stay safe
    Edited on Aug 26, 6:05 because 'cant spell anymore lol'.

  • Augusta Supreme
    August 23, 2006
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    what does AP stand for? are they your initials?

  • Scorpion Boy
    August 23, 2006
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    Great

    Hey lovey, how are ya, loved this poem its great, and keep up the good work, hope we can talk on MSN soon love from John. XXX OOO. LOL.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    August 15, 2006
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    Awww paige, your grandfather sounds like a real prince. He sure is blessed having you in his life. Take good care of him, stand by him and give him lots of s and s every day. He deserves you as you deserve him.
    Great poem.
    Love Brian


  • princesspaige
    July 28, 2006
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    THANK-YOU all for the nice comments i really appristiate it thanx!


  • Errant Panther gold member
    July 26, 2006
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    Very well written Paige, I'm sure JohnnyD was very touched and I am so proud of you for such a heartfelt write. Good work, love from Uncle Panther.


  • blueyez
    July 24, 2006
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    That is soooooooooooooooooooo cute! I really liked it and totally agree! JohnnyD is the best!

  • princesspaige
    July 24, 2006
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    ohhh thank-you everyone so much for your lovly comments!


  • riasme
    July 24, 2006
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    awesome

    i like this one, it's just perfect! I love the rhyming and the flow is fabulous. I will look at your ap grandfather's poems sometime. great job!!

    best wishes,
    cookies and milk

  • justbeyourself
    July 24, 2006
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    awwwww thats sweet i will read his poems nice work honey hugs and <3emily

  • Libra
    July 24, 2006
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    wonderful

    Well if you say he is as wonderful as that then I guess I must go and visit your grandpa
    Paige this was a terrific poem,I have been waiting for you to write something and it was well worth the wait princess.
    The rhyming was great and the theme fandabidoso....loved it and you


  • JohnnyD gold member
    July 24, 2006
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    absolutly super!

    Yes, I am actually a big kid inside and always intend to stay that way. This poem is really great and heart touching Paige and I shall treasure it always, thank you very, very much!


  • little-hug
    July 24, 2006
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    Thie is brill Very sweey and true ! His poems are really great And so are yours The rhyme and flow of this poem are perfect and I love how yo put smiley faces at the beginning and end excellent
    love ya lots like jelly tots
    ♥
    ellie


  • XxMissundastoodxX
    July 24, 2006
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    Oh Paige this is very cute! I'm sure JohnnyD will love it

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