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No End

Death comes forth

The night of darkness is here.

There is no escape from it

Darkness has no light.

Souls have no hope

The night of the end has come.

There is no light within you

Love is hatred and is never meant to be.

You will find nothing in the vast darkness

No end No hope No love Nothing.

Darkness will be and nothing more

Despair, death, night, hatred lives in you.

You cannot defeat the darkness

Let your self die.

Learn to hate.

Become darkness itself

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Written July 24th, 2006

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  • XHollowXEyesX
    April 24, 2007

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    wow a very true dark write. I love the whole piece it is so different and interesting, and dark. very compelling.
    thanks for entering and goodlcuk