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I am Me

This is me. Raw, uncut, and personal.
I am a writer, a dove, a poet, a writer.
A hard-worker, a lover, a woman, a girl.
I've got feelings, I love, I hate, I am jealous.
Of the girl I see in others.
I am cranky, I get cramps, I'm emotional.
I try to be all hard and feeling-less
when really I hurt inside when I say whatever.
My favorite things to do are geeky.
I hate being underestimated.
I am me. No one else.
I hate to try and be someone I am not.
I will not change. Not for even Brad Pitt.
Or the hottest man alive: Vin Diesel.
I am dorky, geeky, pretty, ugly, skinny, fat.
This is me. Raw, uncut, personal.
I have feelings, I am contradicting and I hate it.
If you don't like me, I will tell you this.
This is ME. I will not change.

Author notes

It's not the best because it wasn't really what I would normally write about and I swear I did a ton of erasing but it's really me, from the heart, and head... no where else.
Written July 23rd, 2006

A contest entry

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  • lovelyroses13
    November 8, 2006
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    the best yet

    I love it <3

  • Midnight Diamond
    July 26, 2006
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    This is a good poem. My favorite lines, are the ending. "This is Me. I will not change." It shows that you are you and wont change for anybody no matter what reason. This was a very good poem expressing yourself very well.! Great Job! Keep up the writing.
    -Jennifer Lyn


  • almost-choked-up
    July 24, 2006
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    Fantastic

    I also really like this. You were very honest and heartfelt. Better than my entry. =P My favorite lines are "I've got feelings, I love, I hate, I am jealous." and "I have feelings, I am contradicting and I hate it.
    If you don't like me, I will tell you this.
    This is ME. I will not change."
    You're really talented and this was an awesome poem. Good luck in the contest. =)


  • Tali28
    July 24, 2006
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    I really like it. It's honest, and there is nothing wrong with that. You can only be you. And that is good enough for me. You did a great job. It's what I wanted, you. From the heart and honest. Thank you for entering my contest. Keep up the great writes. Good luck in my contest. Take care of yourself. ttyl Tali