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I am not sure what to say

I am not sure what to say
On such a joyous day
For we are to become one
A knot never to be undone

Were birds of a feather
So we stick together
A puzzle piece we fit
A candle, that has just been lit

Though all we've been
And to be wherein
Hearts must mend
And old loves must end

For we are about to be wed
Let no words, go unsaid
As our vows are read
Our love shall never be dead

As this know soon to be tied
Us, husband and bride
As We say I do
Let it be known, That I'd only be married to you!

Author notes

This poem was ment to be read at a wedding. This is it. Take it or leave it.
Written July 23rd, 2006

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  • stylisthd
    July 26, 2006
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    this is a very beautiful poem great job and good luck


  • I Is Cat
    July 25, 2006
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    Awww Tom I love it. It's beautiful and sweet. It's perfect. Thank you so much for this wonderful poem. I love you bunches bro.

    <3 Catherine

    P.S. Good luck in the contest.


  • Viva La Vie Boheme
    July 24, 2006
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    Take it or leave it you say? Hmmm... I'll take it, because it is so sweet and I think that this would be perfect being read out at a wedding.


  • BrokenWings...Fly
    July 23, 2006
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    aww , this is so sweet ! this write is beautiful . nicely done !
    lubb ya