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Look! I'm lost to Him who saves!

I relish how much more
  a common friend
inspiration has been
  since the intricate Plan
      engulfed us both,
        and brought us close.
And it is so much more frequent
  for me to write--to fight! to win!
Perhaps that explains this giant grin.

Perhaps you explain this feeling of being blessed.
But not "perhaps",
  for I am certain that Jehovah had a hand
in making you the inspiration of this man!

I will miss you, dear sister.

I will miss the smile lighting your face;
I'll miss the fierce lioness in your eyes;
I'll miss your embrace, your warm embrace;
and I will miss lying on a green grass lawn
  under sunsetting skies,
plucking little white dandylions
  to mount them on your ear...
and I will wish you were here
  to comfort and encourage;
  to hold and then be held;
  to brush your tears softly away,
  which, in your eyes, had welled.

But... my arms are short,
  and cannot reach that far
to declare how much I love you
  no matter where in the world you are.

So I am grateful and I'm glad
for a God whose hands formed the skies
and so wonderfully formed you who bring
a tender glint to my eyes.
I am grateful for a God
whose hands formed the heavens,
and I am grateful that, for this daughter,
  whom I love,
the love of God outreaches the love of Evan.

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Written July 23rd, 2006

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  • bludstaindsoliloquy
    August 27, 2006
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    This was sad but one of the most beautiful pieces I have ever read. It realli touches the readers soul and brings them in to the poem.


    Thanks again for your support!

    Maggie
    Edited on Aug 28, 3:05 p.m. because 'edited for spam'.


  • the finer point
    July 25, 2006
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    haha yeah thanks She's a godly woman, and I'm honored to know her, and extremely grateful to have the place in her life that I do.


  • As Autumn Falls
    July 24, 2006
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    ( : This is very sweet Evan. Sounds like she is lucky to have a brother like you.