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Rain

You told me you loved me,
And I truthfully believed.
I stare out at the night,
Night of falling rain.
This is all I see now,
This is my new world.

Do you understand the pain?
All the pain you have given me?
It is now surrounding me
In my whole new world.
I want to take you in this world,
So you'll see what you did to me.

You made me love you,
But I don't know how you feel.
How am I supposed to understand,
What you do not show?
The rain washes away my sorrow,
But I still think of you.

I think of the chance we still have.
But it collides with what you are.
I'll give you the chance,
And I'll give you my heart.
But you must do the same,
For me, that is all I want.

The rain will flow through us,
It will show us the truth.
So let it be the witness
To you telling me how you feel.
Let it be the witness to our love,
Or to our downfall.

For you, my love,
I will wait until the end.
Once you tell me how you feel,
It will either rain forever in my world,
Or the rainbow will finally come out.
So hurry, tell me, so I know.

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Written July 23rd, 2006

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  • Candy Holic Ferret
    October 28, 2006
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    Oh my, very sad and very beautiful at the same time. I'm not quite sure what to say about it, other than what has already been stated. I think that this was written very wonderfully and I truly enjoyed every moment I spent reading it. Thank you very much for entering and good luck.~

    Nikki