Full moon blazes through the sky
Her nerves on edge, hair starts to rise
She walks the path, with sudden pause
Glowing eyes and sharpened claws
Chills run up and down her spine
As she softly hears, "You are mine".
Clouds soon come to hide the moon
She's left to feel impending doom
But still standing, rooted to that spot
Inside, she feels she's getting hot
Hands wrap 'round her silky thighs
From her mouth, escapes a sigh
Something about the way it feels
Turned on a bit, her mind now reels
Feeling dizzy from his touch
Silent pleas to feel the rush
She falls into his outstretched arms
Gazing into his eyes of charm
A gentle kiss upon her lips
His hands hold tight, to her hips
She feels the pierce into her skin
Lust, desire, deep within
He drinks her drops of copper flow
And soon she's weeping down below
His eyes control, his hands roam free
Mesmerized by his ecstasy
Legs spread wide, he enters quick
To find her sex, sweet and slick
With cadent thrusts, her body quakes
Pleasure bound, they shiver, shake
They build and build, ever higher
Inside, consumed by their fire
Release is near, she starts to moan
He grabs her tight, drives it home
Then bites down deep into her vein
Her howls shriek of pleasured pain
Both explode with passioned thrusts
Driven by their primal lusts
Over and over, all through the night
Raw, hard sex, till break of light
Then lay, spent, basking in love's glory
The vampire and his she-wolf, this is their story
Author notes
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Written July 23rd, 2006
In a list
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A contest entry
- Dark Things And Magic Realms (Contest) by DarkHunter.
300 points, ended July 25, 2006, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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No fears nor worries
your writes I'm sure to read
to find within your words
of all your wants and needs
Storm -
Dear
Perhaps upon reading mine
sensual erotica of mind
well, all in time
once, we pray, combine.
AT -
Thank you for the comment. Appreciate it, glad you enjoyed.
Storm -
lovely the story of a she-wolf and a vampire great setting and the visual 2 Thumbs UP
Great write and good luck in the contest
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Thank you both for the gold. I am honored. Yeah, I have a bit of an idea what Jeannie likes to read, and that helped. I am gad you both enjoyed. And thanks for hosting a fantastic contest.
Storm -
Congratulations
Congratulations Storm on the Gold Trophy. This is a fantastic poem that Jeannie and I enjoyed reading. You are an incredibly talented writer. You know what Jeannie likes, wait up shouldn't I be the only one who knows that!!!!
Thank you so much for this amazing entry and well done.
James -
Gold!
Congratulations on a well earned Gold! This was so hot and sexy. I loved it so much. Thanks for entering!
Jeannie
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Thank you Jeannie, glad you liked. Appreciate your comments.
Storm -
Thanks Brent, appreciate your comments hun.
Storm -
Oh hell yeah! That is just fantastic! So visual and hot! Great writing. Extremely well done. Thanks for this terrific entry. Good luck.
Jeannie
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Hey Autumn, this is really good. Dark and twisted, but hot too. Kind of raunchy, in a good way. I like this. Keep the pen flowing, and good luck. Brent
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Thanks hun, that is a huge compliment coming from you. I appreciate your words, always.
Storm -
Woa, nice ending. Loved it, Storm. The Queen of erotic darkness. Excellent work.
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Thank you, appreciate it.
Storm -
a good poem I hope you do well
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Thanks for your entry and good luck
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Thanks Val. I appreciate your words, always.
Storm -
Oh, now this is just sweet. Nice dark little seductive twist. Nice work Storm, very nice. Good luck.
~Val -
LOL, you are a trip. But I love your comments. Thank you, so very appreciated.
Storm -
LOL, God knows, I sure wanted to. Thanks for the comments, appreciate it.
Storm -
Oh my freakin' goodness! This is so damn hot! And I'm already burnin hot here. That really makes it steamy hot!
Wow! And I just so love that line,
"and soon she's weeping down below"
Yikes! It's all good to me. Very good! I think I need to go hose myself down. Toodles! 
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seductive
Do I feel my fangs lengthening, fur growing in my palms, an urge to howl! Well, honey, this poem would give anyone an urge to howl. Or take a cold shower! Wonderful lust and darkness.
hugs WolfHeart -
Thank you. I appreciate your comments. I like writing vamp erotica, have a few floating around the site.
Storm -
Thank you for the comments, glad you've enjoyed.
Storm -
Excellent!
Holey-moley! Gettin' hot in here!
Love the subject matter. Very compelling from line to line with great flow!
Guess I wasn't expecting a vamire poem to be this caliente~ You have pulled this off very well! Very sensual!
Excellent!
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Very sensual and appetizing. Makes me want to get out tonight and roam some dark alleys. Wow, this one sizzles. You can bite my neck anytime you like. Grrrr.
PS: thanks for the bronze. That made my day.
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