I see you come to me
With that look in your eyes
I know you have something to say
And it ain't a big surprise
The one thing I don't want you to do
Is the one thing I know you're gonna do
You're gonna walk away
Like you did yesterday
You leave me sitting here
All alone, heartbroken
You don't want me to speak
My eyes are the words not spoken
And I cry while you walk away
You left nothing but the words I wanna say
I know nothing will come of this
Except the memory of a stolen kiss
I miss you so much, I've died inside
I've fallen, I cannot live
Without you, it's too much to bear
When I've so much love to give
So just you walk away
Never mind how I feel today
Just know that I will always draw near
And fall more in love, year after year
In a list
A contest entry
- True love or what u dreamt love would be when you were younger by E.m.d.
300 points, ended January 9, 2005, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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sensational
i have a poem thats sorta the same title as you, its called just walk away, and thats what got me to read but to my suprise it was sorta like mine but totally different. very good job this brought tears to my eyes. wow u got some talent. -
Amazing
*cries* imgonnahave to remember u ....very good and very sad....realistic too -
Heartfelt emotion
Such a sad poem...one that so many of us can relate too. I loved the line "My eyes are the words not spoken" - so much said, so much emotion in just a few words - lovely! Although this poem is sad and stirs the leaves of the heart, it ends in hope...the promise to yourself to love again. It is amazing how that promise to ourselves adds light and guides us on the path of life. Good luck in the contest and take care!
~ Nicolette
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this was an excellent write. i've realized these are old poems for you but then again, i haven't been a member for too long. you have a great talent and I want to keep seeing this. keep up the outstanding work.
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Excellent!
Awe, this is so sad
*Cries* I feel like that with my ex. That even though we been apart for over 5 months. I still love him and miss him just as much from the day we broke up. This was a an excellent write! I enjoyed it very much! Thanks for entering
I will be picking a winner on April 17th.
James
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