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Overwhelming Love (Part III - I Will Survive)


Every time I enter
Our sea of overwhelming love,
I dive deeper,
But I take a deeper breath.

This third time,
I take my time to slowly drift down,
Take a moment to view
The tropical fish
As I fall for you again.

Enjoying the view,
Calmly descending
Into aqueous emotion.

A mermaid saving her drowning sailor.

Author notes

Part three to the trilogy. I wnated to give the poem a happyish ending even though the story did not. Well. I'm happy, he's happy. But we're not happy as one anymore.
I wrote this on the 5th of July, but have only just got round to posting it. It's totally un-edited, so it has all the pure loving emotion I put into it originally, still contained within the page. =]
Written July 23rd, 2006

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  • Kevo MF Last
    July 30, 2006
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    the story isnt over just yet.. it seems that every time the final chapter is about to close another swift change comes forth and demands that another chapter be wrote. I can only pray that these chages keep comming. I dont ever want us to be over.

    I love you katy

    ~Your Kevin~