Why do I feel this way?
How did you make me feel this way?
I've never felt this way before,
So why am I feeling it now?
I can't get you out of my head.
What did you do?
I can't go one day without thinking of you.
How'd you do it?
Won't you tell me your secret?
Won't you tell me the truth?
Do you really like me?
Or am I a toy for you?
Tell me now so I understand.
How did I fall for you?
Tell me so I know what to do.
How did you do this to me?
Is this something that will grow?
Or something just to keep you sane?
I really need to know,
The feelings that you have for me.
Author notes
Another poem about a guy. What else is there to know?
Written July 23rd, 2006
A contest entry
- hit me with your best shot by a gothic romance.
474 points, ended July 31, 2006, 46 entries
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this poem reads like a conversation. like you are telling him things and asking him questions. not much like a poem. more imagination, change of perspective, a dictionary, metaphors, description, all these things could greatly healp you.
thanks for entering
write on
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