I look at the screen and read
These rules that are so crazy
I laugh and then decide to enter
I do all the rules and now my face hurts
My fries taste funny because of the lint
the distance of the sun divided by 8.775
is 6599430.1994301994301994301994302
Then I think to myself this man is crazy
I wonder if he sleeps
I ponder does he eat
I think why isnt he locked up
Then it hits me hes so insane hes sane
As I write this I figure out something out
That i'm the crazy.
one for entering this contest
Thats why I lock myself from life and light
Author notes
Written July 23rd, 2006
A contest entry
- Address correction requested by penman.
1000 points, ended July 28, 2006, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow this is quite interesting and very very different. But I like it and don't talk bad about your work. I love each and every one of them. Great job my love.
<3 Catherine -
Penman's contests do this to a lot of people. Most of them go unnoticed because they crawl off into their own holes never to be seen again. Congratulations on striking back. I was one of the nuts who tried to follow the rules.
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it was great
it was a good poem.
let me guess when you read through the senario and the terms, and the rules, you decided that this contest was so ludicrous that you should enter but wright a poem about the contest, and penman himself, instead of the contest senerio...wow thats great...its genious actualy if you realy wanted penman to know how much of a laugh his contest gave you with out being all normal and just commenting it. well good work.
good luck
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Interesting
Interesting poem. Definitely a unique form of expression. Thanks for entering and good luck. -
This Was the weirdest and probly the worst poem i ever written.... Thanks
Edited on Jul 23, 2:52 because ''.
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