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A Kiss Goodbye ♥

How do you say goodbye
to someone you love
How can you not cry
when the time you spent together
is all you ever think of

My heart beats faster
as we start our last kiss
I know in my heart
you're the only thing I'll miss

How can I let you go
you're the only one who cared
I'm still thinkin about you
and all the times that we shared

I know eventually it'll all be alright
Cuz times heals everything
and it might not be tonight
not tomorrow
or even the next day
but sooner or later
It'll all be okay

You'll move on
and so will I
You mean a lot to me
but I'm no good with goodbyes

so lets make this kiss short
I'll miss you too
good luck in all you do

I know eventually it'll all be alright
Cuz times heals everything
and it might not be tonight
not tomorrow
or even the next day
but sooner or later
It'll all be okay

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Written July 23rd, 2006

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  • zexzgal
    July 23, 2006
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    Very nice write. It definately fit into the contest, lol. Good luck!!

    ~Lia


  • Magik
    July 23, 2006
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    I know eventually it'll all be alright
    Cuz times heals everything
    and it might not be tonight
    not tomorrow
    or even the next day
    but sooner or later
    It'll all be okay

    I like that piece right there, and you did a very good peom, and the flow went well, but I found no reason to repaeat that part, but I think it worked best for the poem! good luck in the contest!