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i dont know

feeling hopeless and unwanted,
confused and bruised,
twisted and used,
never knowing why,
I do the things i do!
Being the way i am,
isnt very fun,
knowing im a useless,
thing of state mind!
Always wantin to be,
alone and forgotten.
Because then i would feel,
no pain that you cause me.
Never can i see,
the way i wanna see.
Never can i feel,
the way i want to feel.
I always want things,
that never will happen.
Being the way i us to be,
is how i want to feel.
I felt pretty,
and wanted,
and also even someone.
Now i feel,
NOTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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i dont know if this one is good but i know those are my feelings!!
Written July 22nd, 2006

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  • dark fairie69
    March 13, 2007
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    dONT LET HIM GET IN YOUR WAY BABIGURL!!

  • dark fairie69
    December 2, 2006

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    This is great but honey you are beautiful and you shouldn't need a guy to make you feel this way. As pretty as you are they should be lined up around the block to get with you. xoxoKayce


  • superkurd13
    July 23, 2006
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    Mmmm, i'm sorry, that your not feeling anything very happy right now. Feelings like that are not new to me, I've had my share, but it's always sad to me to see a friend in pain. The poem isn't bad, pretty good even, I thought. It flowed well. So how are you doing? I guess it's kinda obvious, but send me an IM and tell me about it.. and if theres ever anything i can do, even though that sounds stupid seeing as you dont even know ME, let me know anyways.

    - Aaron