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White Flag

Hatred hatred hatred
embraces my every thought.
Hope's army isn't breaking through,
but I'm breaking down.
Someone stop this fight.
This battle can only go to war.
The war would end in tragedy.
Don't let my brain,
my thoughts,
become an abandoned battlefield.
I find the numbers on the clock
haunt my every moment
as my hatred chases off my dreams.
Something should surrender,
throw up a white flag.
BE my flag
Be my PEACE.

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Written July 22nd, 2006

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