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Angel Boy

How sad you are,
My Angel Boy.
The sorrow you speak of,
The pain you felt.
I will never know such things,
But I want to know.

Won't you tell me,
My Angel Boy?
Tell me all you've seen,
And all you've been through?
Tell me about your life,
I don't mind.

You're more mature then me,
in more ways then one.
I've lived a sheltered life,
And here, I met you.
You changed my point of view
on everything I've known.

I am sad for you,
My Angel Boy.
Because I feel for you.
I see the looks cross your face,
I hear the unspoken words,
I want to make your life better.

You scare me,
My Angel Boy.
I don't regret meeting you,
I don't regret knowing you.
It's scary to know how much I care for and trust you.
I'm scared to know, how far it will go.

Will you always be there for me?
For I am always here for you.
Is this feeling I feel one sided,
Or do you like me too.
Won't you tell me,
My Angel Boy?

Author notes

I'm not a stalker, (stocker yes, not stalker). I promise.
This is about a friend I know, Angel Boy. I was reading some of his poetry and...yeah.
If he ever read this I would hide. I think...
Anyways, I guess it's showing my feelings for him as well as what I see in him.
Written July 22nd, 2006

A contest entry

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  • RippedRed87
    July 23, 2006
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    Great, like the flow

    This is a great poem! I love the flow, and the Angel Boy. Do you really have an Angel Boy? Anyway, I hope you do well in the contest, I know you will! Good luck, again!!!

  • sexychickever
    July 23, 2006
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    CRAZY N LOVE

    THANKS FOR ALL THE COMMENTS AND YES I REALLY DO CARE FOR HIM BUT I DONT THINK ILL EVER GET A CHANCE UR POEM WAS REALLY GREAT AND ILL GIVE U UR PROPS OR IN OTHER WORDS CREDITS
    CRAZY N LUV


  • To The Pointe
    July 22, 2006
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    This is really something. Very heartfelt, very personal. You really showed how much you care for him, and if he were to read this, you shouldn't hide. It's a beautiful ode to your friend and you meant it from the bottom of your heart, I'm sure. Great write. Keep it up.
    Thanks so much for entering and good luck!
    - Alexa