straight from the heart is where this rhyme comes
cause the pain will never leave but atleast time numbs
when the dry in ur eyes done
there's nothin left to do
u let it flow even tho u got testicles
u compress ur nose then you let it blow like a weapon hole
...u could let it go
but u let her grow...
i understand it's upsetting bro
but set foot to a better road
never let a ho do you like that
and if you let 1 do it, then i can put u back on the right track
but if you get caught up
over another chick
you just another bitch
prolly suck ur mothers tit
it's like you like getting your heart sucked from ur face
love is a chemical means.
to get u to mate
and its a fuckin disgrace
that these clowns think they're lovin when they're buggin
bett-er of druggin, why u think that most can't fall for cousins?
it's bio ology
if you can't follow me
you a fuckin hollow bee lookin for some pollen, g
o, wow, what a suprise!
that love and lust are so similar
and flooded with lies
when the blood runs to your eyes and your chest takes a beating
take a mental note
and remember it well
and when she's seeming like a goddess then remember the hell
and look at this girl, for what she is
not what she seems
your new goal, poppin buttons on the top of her jeans
who cares about her friends or her father or her mother
best-way-to get over 1
is to get under another... and another and another till its all fuckin butter
yea brotha, fuck bitches
don't make love and don't love her
Author notes
and that's how i view the persuit of women as a means of sexual pleasure
there are women out there i respect and have love for
but i will never fall in love again
but don't be sad
I'M NOT!!!!!!!! *happy electric guitar music at the end of an american pie type movie*
Written July 22nd, 2006
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Wow!
lithium on July 26, 2004
wassup...dis the girl right here ...i've been waiting to finally see you, and when ur ass gets back I'm out for three weeks ...I'll be back in 2 weeks, and we can talk then, but I got mad love for you and your skill...stay smokin all day gangsta girl
Much love and respect
~~lithiuM~~
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I'm pretty heart broken to see you might not be returning to AP you have been gone for a few months I see... I will try to contact you some other way but I read this and I cried... for some reason not cause of hos and bitches and what ever people might think but because I have always loved what you wrought it came from the heart and it continues to come from the heart. I hope you know I will till the day I die check my AP account and go on to write, till I find your dissapearing ass XD *can't say much I did it to you but it wasn't my fault Lith my dad took me from my mom cause I was smokin and gettin in so much trouble shit got fucked up for a while. And don't think that for a day I didn't miss reading your rhymes and talkin to you. I thought about you all the time wonderin if you were mad cause I left... I don't know... I hope to hear from you!
Much love and respect always,
~Kimber *Lithiumsgirl*
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awww, george..
don't give up on love. most girls are garbage, but someday you'll find the right one..
"o, wow, what a suprise!
that love and lust are so similar
and flooded with lies"
that was awesome. haha. but you know..
if it's full of lies and shit like that..
it's probably not love anyway.
take your time and find the right one..
she'll be lucky to have you.
love and miss you, hun. a lot.
hit me up sometime.
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I'm not just saying this because you're my boy, but this was very, very, very good. As a poem, some readers might not see it, but when it comes to hip hop, this is top of the fucking line. Good to see you back in the game, we need you back in the group man. There's 7 or 8 people in there that are worth a shit, you'd be joyously accepted into Dan's new group, aka purptionary, purple bunny. Once again, fantastic write man, my favorite line...
who cares about her friends or her father or her mother
best-way-to get over 1
is to get under another... and another and another till its all fuckin butter
yea brotha, fuck bitches
don't make love and don't love her
I've said it before and it's so true, even though I'm practically married now with a two year old and a baby on the way. Love, Peace, Cracka T... -
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Wow..lol..very good!
hehe..awws..u wont fall in love again..damnit! That counts me out then! 
xoxo
Courtney
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A very sad and angry piece. I agree that often times love screws us over but honestly that is no reason to truly give up on love. I hope that one day love does find you and you find it in return. It's a true sight to behold and experience. Over all this piece was very well done with serious expression and emotion. Nice Job!
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Awsome
very good poem i like the line "u compress ur nose then you let it blow like a weapon hole" intresting imagery right there. i also find this line "never let a ho do you like that" imusing. anywayz great poem hope all gets better with your bro-doug-
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so sad to think this is all you know of love there's a whole world out there waiting for you I hope you fall in love again and this time enjoy all its pleasures.... best of luck to you...
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great write big guy
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