Humanly Love
Our love—
a mere feeling
yet so powerful and healing
a red cloak that covers the earth
lovingly wrapping and providing warmth to those who suffer
waving and fanning those with inner fire needing a cool breeze
Given to us—
by our merciful God
to be shared and spread throughout the world
sent forth to find its way to every nook and cranny; person, heart, soul, fauna, and flora
once it is received, it multiplies in number, volume, and strength
always able to reach beyond words, understanding, time and space
An open heart—
waits for love’s dawning
receives and utilizes it to all’s highest good
allowing life to be cleansed of all impurity and ambiguity
as it continuously emerges victorious
glorifying God’s creation
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Written July 22nd, 2006
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Your form is very interesting, and it adds spontaneity to the piece. I think you have expanded on the subject of love well. You explore its many meanings in enlightened contexts. Well done.
Thundercat -
well penned
words backed up by stong conceptions of spiritual truth. -
Wow, I love this so much! It was utterly beautiful and an amazing peice of work. God bless
xxxx -
Though I am tired and our of it... this poem rocks!
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WOW...love...is so amazing when you find it...but the most deadliest poison once you lose it...so why do we humans crave this beautiful deadly poison? Neways yes im in love...and its the most amazing feeling ever...i dont want to ever lose it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wonderful write!
ceci -
Excellent
Kinda makes you feel like you can just run outside and find someone ya know? I really like it! -
I love this poem. You did so well and I loved your format. Truly a wonderful write. Great job and keep up the good work!
mina -
Thank you so much. That is exactly what I was thinking of when I wrote it.
Anulka -
a ver well concieved and penned poem , i was truly impressed not only with the content of the poem but also your expression welldone
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If only the sides involved in the middle east crisis would read this and understand it - someone needs to pay heed to the message this poem conveys. Sentiments well expressed in these lines. Humanly love...
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