Where true love burns
Desire is...
Love's eternal flame
It's the reflex
of Love's flare
It takes meaning from
"unnobler parts"
and translates them to
the language of the heart
The wanting of a date
The longing of a kiss
It's unfortunate
that it's a miss
For you have passion
but you haven't a trace
of power
to entice
Nor can you find
A more beautiful face
Author notes
option 2
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A contest entry
- Hit Me With Your Best Shot (Pre-writes allowed) by Dark Whispers.
315 points, ended April 2, 2007, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Option Contest by Beating.
600 points, ended June 14, 2007, 39 entries
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Hey, thank you for entering, however you didn’t follow one of the rules. If you want to know which one you broke then go see the contest page. lol Because you broke one of the rules, I have to remove you from the contest.
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its too short, i just realized that, srry
i really need to make some kind of chart because i don't know every single poem i write by heart entirely. i don't know which ones don't swear, how many lines, hidden meanings, obvious meanings, the story behind them all by name. Its why i haven't been able to enter a contest for over a month. i'm going to have to make a chart or something to help me with this.
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"Where true love burns
Desire is...
Love's eternal flame"
I love that part! This piece is very beautiful, and a good definition of desire! -
This expresses human desires perfectly. The words were well used and I like flow of it . Thanks for entering and best of luck.
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♥ Lacey -
this is very different...and true about desire...there are many passions unfullfilled out there...peace and harmony...shzoosy
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