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Times of Trial

Cool  breezes  blow  through  screen  windows
Creaking  open  and  shut
the  old  wooden  doors
The  sky  continues  to  darken  with  each  passing  minute
Thunder  softly  roars  from  a  distance
I  sit  and  try  to  listen  to  it
while  hidden  in  the  highest  room
As  far  as  I  can  get
from  the  tormentor  below
I  plug  my  ears  as  the  voice  calls  to  me
Ignore  it's  attempt  to  lure  me  back  down  
Back  into  a  whirlwind  of  mind  games
and  fantasy
Confusion  between  fact  and  fiction
Deception  beyond  understanding
I  try  to  move  quietly  so  as  not  to  cause  a  stirring
But  still  wonder  if  I  am  ever  truly  safe
So  often  feeling  defenceless
I  can  only  patiently  wait
until  my  protector  returns

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Written July 22nd, 2006

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  • Uniquely-Scarred
    August 22, 2007
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    very cliver wonderful metaphor going on here really smart piece of writing flawless.