A red rose,
and crimson tears.
A dead rose,
for all your fears.
Love me?
Use me,
I'm all yours.
Abuse me,
I'll listen to your laws.
Love me?
Suicide is a virtue.
But murder is a sin.
Kill me, why not?
Dont lose your pretty grin.
Love me?
Take my heart, just take it,
and hide it.
I'll give you my dark heart.
Even though it's not worth shit.
Love me?
Just dont break me again.
Author notes
'Death Mask' [[On AP]] was my inspiration for this.
I should really start writing more poems.
Ack! Its so hot today! I'M MELTING!
Written July 22nd, 2006
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this is good, please keep writting .
--Blessed be--
Shacadia Shay
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Darling
OK I love you
if you only knew
that each petal opens
your beauty that befriends.
smoosh
Janet -
Thankyou_x
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having to revert to submission to have someone love you, a very interesting concept with a strong sense of desperateness. and the repetition of "love me?" causes a bit of a stinging pain whenever i read it. the last line is also very strong. this is one of the best poems i've read recently.
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OMG!! this is awesome lil sis. I LOVE IT!! Great job. I love the rhyming n flow. I love how you repeated Love me? Great poem n keep it up hun.
Love,
Alyssa
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Hhmm New, Interesting, and defient its a nice write, How I inspired that im not certain but its a very nice piece.
Lull in Death,
~~Mask~~
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