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Your Eyes

My heart beats; It breaks
It sings; It craves
It wants to love again

My dreams; They come
They go, there hot, there cold
They want aw, so much more

Your eyes they call
They pull, they draw
I hope I'll read them right

For it's my heart
In my dreams
Your eyes, that call me
Close each night

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Ok Flirting is fun
Written July 22nd, 2006

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  • August 5, 2006
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    a very fun poem to read with such spunk and a joyful spirit!!
    i enjoy your poems immensley and it is nice to see you having fun with a "flirty" nature!! you do so much for others i wish for you to receive back 10 fold what you desire!!
    a delight to read and i thank you for sharing this charming poem~
    bless you~
    lynn


  • Abreadcrumbandfish
    August 4, 2006
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    AAWWW, another fun poem. Flirty indeed!! I truly enjoy your work, it makes me smile.


  • Sandygram silver member
    July 22, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    Yes you are a big flirt Charlie. But a nice one. Your special someone is out there. When the time is right she will be there. For now keep having fun. You deserve it. But most important, stay safe. Your friend, Sandy
    Edited on Jul 22, 9:47 because ''.

  • June-bug
    July 22, 2006
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    excellent

    very, very nice, oh so true when one gets in you heart you tend not to be able to get them out of your head... and I agree flirting is fun. Excellent write.