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Prayer of wonder

I hate this world of an existant called life!
I'm a good person with only one goal in heart
To be with her but she never comes, and yet
I would die a thousand times to have her here!
She doesn't come!
I echnor those women that try to tempt me but yet
I do not fold, I would rather kill myself then too
Have sex with women that enjoy that temptation!
It's hard searching for the one your heart truely
belongs too! In our new world is where my heart truely
lyes! Not to this blemish of so called life for world!
I have not excepted this world but I deal with it because
I have been choosen to do so!
I admit that this place of hell can be tedious
Why not destroy all hate,destruction,evil all at once!?
Awww but none other than "God" himself can tell you "WHY"
He is my happiness and "Jesus" is my king that he sent!
I will stay and remain loyal until my dieing day! Amen!

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Written July 22nd, 2006

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  • Anthos and his love
    August 7, 2006
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    Thank you soo much for taking the time too comment me on this write! I was beginning to think that my writtings were useless and crappy.
    Yah i've been through alot...and I mean not just ur average ohh everyone has problems. I mean, it's been hell and thankfully there were enough good times through that hell to keep me alive.
    Thanks again!
    Signed,
    Anthos


  • Lonely
    August 6, 2006
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    So nice to read such an emotional write.. Yep your religion is what really matters... and there is not much sincerity left in this world anyways.. Great write keep writing..

    ~ Soledad