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If you open up your mind

If you open up your mind
You will truly see
What you are
And what you need

If you open up your mind
Wonderful things will show up inside
Just take a chance and you will see
What you are and what you need

I know it’s real
For I have seen
All that I can truly be
And what I really need to be free

You can be all that you wish
If you open up and see
What you are
And what you need

Come and see
What all is there
A wonderful journey
No need to be scared

You can have all that you wish
If you will open up and see
What you are
And what you need

~vampy~

Author notes

I notice that when I drink I can REALLY open up my mind.  WOW!
Written July 22nd, 2006

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  • Night-lord
    July 28, 2006
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    great

    LOL a different write for you except it is really good. Great and enjoyable read thanks
    Kicks robert Timber!


  • vampira1665 silver member
    July 23, 2006
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    I was drunk tho. But it turned out sooo purdy and insightful.


  • sevnsyn silver member
    July 23, 2006
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    This is beautiful..Hope,Knowledge and dream wraped up in a poem,truely wonderful!


  • Theater Of Dreams
    July 23, 2006
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    Arf!

  • vampira1665 silver member
    July 22, 2006
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    Well me butt is ALOT smaller now, he may miss it! Just kidding Bahamut. I am making sure I don't go anywhere or do anything when I am drinking. No worries my dear.


  • Theater Of Dreams
    July 22, 2006
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    OH yeah...he's aiming for yo butt!!!!!!!!!!


  • vampira1665 silver member
    July 22, 2006
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    ya think he will?


  • robert bolin
    July 22, 2006
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    Now it's time for the Vampy stomp, Awsome set of lyrics you have here vampy, straight from the heart and soul of a real angel, oops I mean beautiful vampy that is,

  • Theater Of Dreams
    July 22, 2006
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    Rap? Kakka!
    This background is STUNNING. Yes, definitely it seems you have penned a lyric as well.

    Stop getting toasted. You think it's not a drug? I am gonna send bahamut over and have him toast your buns!!!!!!!!!

    Love;
    The KING. ♥


  • Immortal Beloved
    July 22, 2006
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    mommy could be a battle rapper yo momma fo shizzle


  • goddesskevauna
    July 22, 2006
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    Ooooh! What are you drinking? Can I have a sip of that? This is so cool! It's got a nice bounce to it as well. Heh, could almost be lyrical too. I can hear the "what you are and what you need" just echoing throughout it all. Very lovely sis! No serious, I wanna a drink too!

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