Your love brings me to my knees
I thank the gods for blessing me
and I pound the earth with anger
The breezes touch my skin
and the memories cut through me like a knife
My eyes burn with tears as I long for you
I am torn with the feeling of your longing for me
you belong to me and I belong to you
I feel you...I know you now
You are awesome, incredible, a mystery
you are all that I love and some that I hate
You taunt me, you tease me, you love me
You help me, you need me, you distance yourself
Sparkling tinsel falls upon us...it ignites with passion
I kiss the dew from your lips
I cup your face
You see through me..you enter the unknown,
how strong you are
how strong I am
how weak we have become
Lift me, take me..I am ready
fly with me, love with me, lets take to the sky
and watch the world from the heavens
I will take all that you are
I offer all that I am and will ever be
change your colors with me
explore with me
taste the wine
the bitter and the sweet
drink with me
I envy that which touches your lips
Oh sweet abundance
fill me to the brim with you
I shall never tire of you
but thirst for more
always for more
I will wait
I will set my heart aside to wait for you
you that makes it whole
makes it feel
and makes it real
It was real, it is real, it will be real
It is a true love
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Written July 22nd, 2006
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heartfelt & emotional
such an emotional and heartfelt passionate plea. deep with feeling ranging from one end of the spectrum to the other. yet why the anger at the beginning, leaves the reader wondering. The belonging to one another is questionable. No one belongs to another, but giving to one another is the way.
A truly remarkable journey through the heart. Blessed be you if you can have this.
Mouser -
"I envy that which touches your lips
Oh sweet abundance
fill me to the brim with you
I shall never tire of you
but thirst for more
always for more"
Sighhh...Ahhh, Noreen...how lovely & loving this is, my Friend...Glorious depths of emotion permeate each & every line with the breathing of your Beloved...Gorgeous metaphor & use of language, Lady...& ohhh, how I hope he hears your plea...Beautifully done, Soul~full One...
Wanda
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NOW THAT IS REAL POETRY!
Very deep and written from te heart. NOW THAT IS REAL POETRY! Beautifully expressed! PERFECT! Love and hugs...
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i agree with everyone. this is a very expressful and beautiful piece of work here. i can't say which part of i loved the most because i really truly liked the whole thing. the title just wraps it all up perfectly. wonderfully written stuff here. keep on writing...
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This is a beautiful piece, so much you have expressed. I especially love these lines:
"Oh sweet abundance
fill me to the brim with you
I shall never tire of you
but thirst for more"
So much passion within those words. Excellent writing
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Very well done. You express your feelings so well. I hope to see new pieces from you soon. I really enjoy your work. Thanks for sharing. Jeannie D Hunter
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I agree, very well done! Its got wonderful flow and beautiful emotional. I agree it is a little rushed but amazing nonetheless.
(thanks for you comment on my poem )
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This is excellent.A powerful write.A poem about a turbulant love but one that is definately real.Well done, Ros
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I think this poem had a few very random things that didn't make sense. The transition between the memories and the emotions seemed a bit hurried, and the fact that it was such a long, uninterrupted poem without any stanzas made it a bit hard for me to follow.
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This is beautiful. Very well written and so deeply heartfelt, I wanted to jumb in and be apart of it all.
This is very strong and commanding, a truly wonderful write.
Outstanding!
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WOW!!!
Wow! This is very......soulful? I love the feeling of committment within your words. The committment to the love your share. This is a powerful write. Intense and commanding. Very well done. Blessings! Tammy -
"the memories cut through me like a knife"
"you are all that i love and some that i hate"
"You help me, you need me, you distance yourself"
"how weak we have become"
These lines anchor this poem! This is superb!
Cris
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you are in love! Awe! excellent. I could feel the passion.
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This is a very good write that you had penned here
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Very good job i loved this poem!! it had a lot of emotion to it!! excellent!!
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Excellant/romantic
Fan tas tic, just as it is. -
This is a very good write that you had penned here
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Excellent, very well done...beautiful!
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lovely it is jus wonderful wow iamazed this is totally beautiful so loving ans expressive true heart felt words
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ture love is so real this is a real nice write of love and the words flow with ease great job....
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i like it. nice flow to it. good job with this. enjoyed the read.
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Aint Love grand
Awesome write...verrry powerfully expressed... -
OMG, nor.......this...this is IT...you are madly, monumentally, mysteriously taken....I lvoe everythign abotu this poem...everything...every word, every image..every stanza, and that it is so.
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AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ceci -
awesome
wow that is awsome it read beautifully just perfect i loved it
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