My new love has dried my tears
and scared away my fears
he holds me when i feel like i cant go on
and all the broken pieces he has withdrawn
he made me feel whole
now my life has taken another toll
he was my first in two different ways
but only his love i crave
I dont think i could live without his touch
on a count of i love him so much
who ever made the sence about love,
should of gave a warning
and seeing his face when i wake up each morning
my body just over flows with joy
and all this that im feeling,
is just over one boy
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my new love jake...god the words to explain how i feel. i always thought love well i love him and i love him and all of this other bullshit. now that i know who love is and what love is. im scared to walk away.
Written July 21st, 2006
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- LoveLoveLoveLoveLove... by And Hyetal.
400 points, ended October 22, 2006, 51 entries
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awesome poem...haven't heard much from ya lately, specially in terms of poetry. great way to make a comeback though...awesome poem...later...
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