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Barbecue on the ark

The animals came in two by two,
They all queued up for the barbecue

“Oh, after you,”
Said the caribou!

“How do you do,”
Said the elder ewe,

“I’ve got a bird’s eye view,”
Said the cockatoo,

“What a hullabaloo,”
Said the kangaroo,

But the old gnu,
As he joined the queue,
Said, “If one gnu is a gnu
Then two gnus makes news.”

So he and his wife played
The didgeridoo
While the burgers sizzled
On the barbecue

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Written July 21st, 2006

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  • art.e.miz
    October 9, 2006
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    i have no idea to be honest-im sort of sticking away form that...and saying it might be a coincidence


  • TimeLady42
    October 5, 2006
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    ha ha.
    sarah as in cuthbert?


  • JohnnyD gold member
    August 25, 2006
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    very cute

    I really, really like the humor and flow in this poem. Your humor is much like mine, God, is that scary! Two of us out there! Nice write, Oh, who am I? I'm Sarah's dad, she can tell you all my obnoxious secrets! I always wondered if one crossed a Kangaroo and a cow if they would get a Kangamoo??


  • forever dreaming
    July 26, 2006
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    Ok so you didn't write this but whoever did, thanx for making me laugh so much I've just choked on my tobelerone. Have you found the source of the phantom writer yet??????

  • art.e.miz
    July 23, 2006
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    i didn't write it...no idea who did - but its here somehow...help....

  • art.e.miz
    July 23, 2006
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    i didn't write it...no idea who did - but its here somehow...

  • art.e.miz
    July 23, 2006
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    When was this writen???
    i didn't write it!!!i haven't been online for at lesat 3 days!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Vania
    July 22, 2006
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    enjoyable

    strange, but in a good way. not the least bit depressing, but enjoyable. keep writing we all love your poems!!!!


  • tawk gold member
    July 22, 2006
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    excellent poem

    Very cute and very uplifting. excellent poem

  • TimeLady42
    July 22, 2006
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    intriguing.
    yes, quite.
    very
    intriguing.
    me likey.
    but i think that i've heard the thing about the gnus before.

  • sraphael
    July 22, 2006
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    Woot woot.......good stuff Devon. Very random!

  • Ghetto Girl
    July 21, 2006
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    Thank God - something NOT depressing. Great work!

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