if you want the war to stop,
can't stand to see people,
crying,
torn up inside,
killing each other,
won't you give love,
to people,
because,
only love could bring love,
one love could do it all,
I remember,
one of my classmates,
was killed last year,
he wasn't a bad person,
he was always feeling,
like he wasn't wanted in this world,
that's why I am telling you,
only love could bring love,
when you love,
you are loved back,
makes a better life,
even brings a smile in people's face,
like a sun shining on you,
that's a kind of thing I want,
to see in people,
a smile,
only love,
could make that happen,
love could bring us all together,
so please keep the love strong,
we need that love,
to be upon us,
this world will be a safe place,
to be in,
only love could bring,
love.
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Written July 21st, 2006
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nice poem. i liked how it just gave the reader incredible emotion and how you expressed such a valuable lesson so well. hmm..my only suggestions would be that you dont have to use a comma at the end of every line, but that's just my opinion. wonderful message. great job. rock on.
p.s. thanx again for your comment on my poem
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amazing
wow, your a really good writer how long you been writing for? Keep it up and your right "Only love could bring love"
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