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& He Weeps.

He gave his only son
so we could live without sins,
Satan wouldn't get the best of us
But even now we sin,
& he weeps.

He gave his life for us
So we could live in harmony,
but seeing what his people
have become after his greatest sacrifice,
Jesus weeps.

Look at what we have become,
& be ashamed.

War, bloodshed, & death
is what we give to our father,
he looks down in agony
for we kill his children,
& he weeps.

If you were him and saw
what his children were capable of doing,
wouldn't you feel the same?
He gave us everything we could ever want,
& we make him weep.

Look what we have done,
to our only father.

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This is for our father, who gave his son for us.
Written July 21st, 2006

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  • Tabitha-Robin
    December 29, 2006

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    Truth Speaks

    This is a very wonderful poem and message you have written here. God is writing through you to speak His words. Love it.

    Tabitha


  • jjbreunig3
    November 23, 2006

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    An enjoyable write

    An enjoyable write; nicely done; a great message; I touch upon the weeping of Christ in a poem called "Silent Tears" - perhaps you would like it.

  • guitarguy17
    July 21, 2006
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    very true babe very true indeed