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Are you a Good Year

 



You look like your a good year
sweet not to complex
the kind you slowly sip
when the bouquet not to preplex  

 

You look like your a good year  
i love the taste of sweet fine wine
I see your eyes are sparkling
they draw me in and cloud my mind
 

 

Your really not to fruity
Kinda earthy, just my way
I'm a really tall drink
I really hope that it's OK

 

you know you are a good year
the kind that test the sands of time
if you might be interested, I'm a fifty nine  
I know that your a good year

Author notes

A play on terms,  Still flirting
Written July 21st, 2006

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  • June-bug
    June 3, 2007

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    Hope you don't mind, just decided to read some of your works again. This one made me think it has been almost a year since you emailed me for the first time. HMMM, time does fly doesn't it, it has been a good year too!


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 16, 2006
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    Delicious!

    A very novel, nice, and quirky way to let a lady know you think she's a real woman! I like it...

  • Shades Of Blue2U
    August 8, 2006
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    This one really made me smile. Thank you for the link to it. You made my night. I love theses lines. They were cute.

    Your really not to fruity
    Kinda earthy, just my way
    I'm a really tall drink
    I really hope that it's OK

    Very nice to read. It's OK

    Becca


  • Sandygram
    July 22, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    This was really cute Charlie. I guess being on vacation for 4 days over there, you will doing alot of sipping of the wine from fifty-nine. Gulp Gulp Gulp. I would say behave but what the heck live it up. That is the reason you are going. Take care of yourself. Stay safe and don't forget to take your dancing shoes with you. God Bless you, Sandy

  • dont-4-get- duckie
    July 21, 2006
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    it took me a second time to get some of it, too. very good piece, nice job.


  • Neppie
    July 21, 2006
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    Cute Very cute Ive read some of your other works and you are a very talented writer.I look forward to reading more of your work.


  • stylisthd
    July 21, 2006
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    very nice poem

  • June-bug
    July 21, 2006
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    excellent

    This is very cute, I like your play on words, it took me reading a second time to catch some of it, what can I say I am a little dense at times. LOL Again you talent shines. nice write.


  • July 21, 2006
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    a delightful poem!
    so full of whymsy and very creatively written!
    your use of metaphors is very funny and it
    is nice to see the "comedic" side of you!
    a fun poem to read and i thank you for the smiles!
    lynn


  • gullionmar
    July 21, 2006
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    very nice charlie well written but you spelled bouquet wrong ok this is how it is spelled ok

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