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Wolf spirit of the night


In a dream I saw him
Wolf spirit of the night
Watching every movement
Keeping me from fright

And as I wondered aimlessly
Searching for some peace
I found a tranquil feeling
And my sorrows did release

Aurora wolf the daring
From the northern sky
Came to me within a dream
And helped my spirit fly

When I woke from this dream
I was within the light
Left with a restful feeling
From wolf spirit of the night

~*~


Author notes

Picture: Wolf Aroural
Artist: David Penfound

Written July 21st, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 22, 2006
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    Your words left a feeling of promised hope, something to grasp onto in a world of so many unrealistic things. I think it was soft and tender. Written very well. I like your take on the pic.

    Thanks for entering and good luck
    Storm

  • Kitty C
    July 22, 2006
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    Spiritual, Hopeful, Inspiring

    What a sweet poem! When I saw the picture I just thought "sad" but you not only made it a happy poem, you fit it quite well to the picture. I loved the flow this has and the way the short lines are serious but hopeful. I also loved the way your rhymes fit together (I have a hard time rhyming without it seeming too contrived). Does this poem follow a particular form? I'm just learning--I used to just write and read poetry that sounded good to me; rhythm, meter, etc make my head spin. The background and text colors are very pretty and easy on the eyes as well. All-in-all a very pleasant read.


  • Kari gold member
    July 21, 2006
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    that was very good ooo and on your quote lol I just usually leave mine alone now everytime u visit a BIO it changes...and makes it say that but if u wait for a few hours your quote always comes back!
    Edited on Jul 21, 8:54 p.m. because ''.


  • FifthDove
    July 21, 2006
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    Thank you


  • rainyday woman silver member
    July 21, 2006
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    I so agree this is a great write, and you've done the best so far. Good luck in this contest and all you endeavor to do. Cheryl


  • queen Moderators member
    July 21, 2006
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    Excellent poem Very serene to my mind Good luck in the contest


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    July 21, 2006
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    WOW! A beautiful poem with lovely imagery and rhyme. Nice choice of words and the meter is maintained well.

    All the best,
    Char

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