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Broken Marionette

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Within the silver moonshine,
wounds heal and chains release
Silken petals dance upon the wind,
thorns cut through bonds long held tight
Freedom awaits you, marionette
Your wishes will come true
Fly upon the wind and follow the light

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Written July 21st, 2006

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  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    July 21, 2006
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  • Yunaleska gold member
    July 21, 2006
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    aww, so beautiful and sweet Love it. So much in so little words.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    July 21, 2006
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    I appreciate you, darling.
  • outlawtorn
    July 21, 2006
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    short but very meaningful. thank you my dear thorn
  • Stinger
    July 21, 2006
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    I enjoyed the sound of this - almost abstract. short and kind of tight.
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