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Life

Life is a word
That means a lot
When you are sad
You feel too bad,
Your voice can go too high
But it might be too low
Because you feel mad


Life is  a word
That means a lot


When you are happy
You feel the joy
You can shout, why?
Because you are so happy

Life is a word
That means alot

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Written July 21st, 2006

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  • MusicalMe
    August 6, 2006
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    It's very different and interesting to write about the word 'life' like that. Great write.


  • sweethelper
    July 27, 2006
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    excellent write !! truely inspiring !! thank you so much for sharing it with us !!

    yours ,
    TRUTH WRITER


  • angelsslayer
    July 23, 2006
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    Nice subject to write about. I like your take on life Good write