Wer' Shippin' on

Wer' Shippin' on
We won't be here.
Wer' Shippin' on
With joyful tears
Wer' Shippin' on
Our hearts'll cheer
Wer' Shippin' on

because when
Wer' Shippin'
Wer' Shippin'
you draw us near

Author notes

need input . . . these are lyrics for a song I am starting to put together. The song has a fairly high-tempo, high energy feel to it, and (b/c its me that's making it) heavy on drums ^_^.
I was thinking the line needs something with the word "prayers" at the end and four beats per line. This is intended to be a worship song. If you didn't notice, it plays on the pun of "Worship" and "We're Shipping". I know, corn kernals are pouring out of my mouth as I type, and its kinda sad. But as a starting musician, ya gotta start somewhere -_- If you've humored me enough to even ready it, I am sorry to have let your expectations down, and if you have gone the extra mile to read this: input would be appreciated.
Written July 21st, 2006