your eyes tell only truth
the only truth you've ever known
smile for the day
tomorrow will come
everything will be okay.
hidden by a beautiful word
smothered in sarcastic views
dampened by the rain
the ever-bleeding scar
trust the only way you know
speak the only truth you know
close your eyes the only way you know
defend yourself the way you know
don't shut me out
open your soul to me
without doubt
tuesday seems so far away
today,
everything will be okay
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Written July 21st, 2006
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Holy crap!
how did you know that Tuesday is supposed to be so important a day for me and Nicole? this last bit is so just what i would say to her tonight if i can get ahold of her.
"don't shut me out
open your soul to me
without doubt
tuesday seems so far away
today,
everything will be okay"
i hope everything WILL be ok and i'll take your words as prophesy since the timing could not have been better.
My only wish is that i could have give 10 applause.
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wow... of course everything will be ok...however.. life is never what you thought it should be
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A nice write I could relate although I am the one Who is shutting people out. The person shutting out often forgets we hurt the ones we love and care about. A great write. You are awsome.
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Nice, i can relate to the lines:
don't shut me out
open your soul to me
without doubt
tuesday seems so far away
today,
everything will be okay
Seems as though you are waiting for something.
Well i hope your alright, love ya.
Peace -
Did you know I love you Stefani? You're a little hottie with your gorgeous little son!! Wooo mmm I LOVE YOU HONEY! wonderful poem!! hope everything will be okkk if you need me i'm on myspace alottttttt
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Good job sweetie this poem was great. I found these lines:
smile for the day
tomorrow will come
everything will be okay
quite interesting and comforting. It was a very lovely poem and keep up the good work!-love, mommy butterfly
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i really like the part... "don't shut me out
open your soul to me
without doubt
tuesday seems so far away
today,
everything will be okay"
i love this poem... it flows and is well written... good work...
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Great!
Oh my god, I love this part: "trust the only way you know
speak the only truth you know
close your eyes the only way you know
defend yourself the way you know"
I don't know why, but I'm madly in love with it, Great writing! Great flow, great everything!
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