Secrets are for those with no ears
Quietly they whirl in your head
An obsession so strong it hurts in your sleep
So dark, a passion and fury that can't die
Consuming hopes, it won't let go
Never satisfied, once released can never be hidden
You can never push it back inside
Secrets are for those with no ears
You are my obsession
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Written July 21st, 2006
A contest entry
- What's in a Word? by Sleeping Cougar.
300 points, ended August 5, 2006, 31 entries
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Good job. Very well done. This is very powerfully written. I like the depth and darkness to it. Thank you for sharing.
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I like this one. Im too tired to give a proper critique. I just woke up. -_-`zzzz And i definitly qasnt going to read that long story. Adhd has got a hold on me in the mornings. lol <3Helena
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